Last post for the writing class

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Well what could I say to someone who is writing a first time paper. Well I would tell you that find a lot of research and keep the facts to facts. Knowing that its hard when you want to take a side that you can not. That is really hard for me. I wanted to make points that, Yes depression is hard to deal with but you can over come depression with enough medical help. That is what medical care profession is out there for.
The areas I feel that I have over come are being more clear when I am writing and making an accurate points and not judgmental points. This is really hard for me because i wanted to say that societies do treat people different when they they feel that they a medical issue of any sorts. Writing with words that are more adulthood by that I mean not using words that make my paper too wordy.
When finishing up I have to say that its very true when you have a teacher that cares about your work that it makes it better. You feel more confident in your work. Sometimes we might feel that are teaching is picking on us when really they are working with us. A lot I have learned is do not be too judgmental and try your hardest because your teacher will see your hard work.

Week Nine blog

With weeks nine blog I have done it but because the storm has knocked out are power so it did not save. But as I worked so hard on my paper I did not get a grade that good. I am sorry about that. I have redone my work several times. I am not sure if I am ever going to be a good writer. That does bother me. Sometimes with a research it gets really hard because we have a lot of things that we want to say but can not say them because of as a writer you can not take a side. I have to say that I learned that paramedic was really helpful. As the paper came closer to end it was harder to hand it in because i did not feel that I had enough on my paper. APA format is very hard also. But as I am writing my own word is really hard but working as a medical transcriptionist I feel that I am going to be better at writing someone else words then mine. More I do through out my courses I feel that I have picked a better choice for me then I thought.
As I worked on this paper I found it hard to find topics to do that were not controversial. But I think that if I had to write another paper, I would do it on teen pregnancy. That is such a raise but there are parents who don't want to put there daughter on birth control. So where does a parent do when they find out they are pregnant. Sometimes we have to a say well what do we do if we do not want are children pregnant well as parents we have to change are thinking and change are ways.