Last post for the writing class

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Well what could I say to someone who is writing a first time paper. Well I would tell you that find a lot of research and keep the facts to facts. Knowing that its hard when you want to take a side that you can not. That is really hard for me. I wanted to make points that, Yes depression is hard to deal with but you can over come depression with enough medical help. That is what medical care profession is out there for.
The areas I feel that I have over come are being more clear when I am writing and making an accurate points and not judgmental points. This is really hard for me because i wanted to say that societies do treat people different when they they feel that they a medical issue of any sorts. Writing with words that are more adulthood by that I mean not using words that make my paper too wordy.
When finishing up I have to say that its very true when you have a teacher that cares about your work that it makes it better. You feel more confident in your work. Sometimes we might feel that are teaching is picking on us when really they are working with us. A lot I have learned is do not be too judgmental and try your hardest because your teacher will see your hard work.